“If you change that comma to a semi-colon, and the put dashes between ‘red,’ ‘white,’ and ‘blue,’ it’ll make more sense and hit harder,” Katie says. I flip the fake chicken patties I’m frying and nod in agreement, with a huge grin on my face.
“I really appreciate you helping me edit my stuff,” I tell her later.
“Just ask the person who doesn’t like poetry!” she says.
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